I actually voted it 5 points because more people should hear the story, but it seems too obvious to point out what needs to be fixed with your animation, so I have reviewed it 2.5. The story itself is great, and the format that you told it was great, but if it was not stick figures and was animated a little more this would get a much more decent score. Thanks for the entertainment though and sorry you pissed your pants.
Reviews for "Dylan's Story"
I used to do the same thing when I do to Walmart. (Play the games, not pee myself)
Certainly not a bad story. Could have used a little more illustration and animation.
I liked it.
Hahaha funny man, unlucky on that guy
BobtheZebra responds:
I didn't feel bad for him at the time but now that I think about it, I guess it would have been nice to help him.... oh well hahaha
Even though the animation was pretty simple, it was a good animation. Funny story too. I wonder how you lived with the shame?
BobtheZebra responds:
Surprisingly no one found out about this story until recently so I really had no shame about it, and now I look back and laugh about the whole experience. Thanks for your input though, I know it was simple animation, but this was made for a project in my english class and it didn't have to be that elaborate. Also I only had 2 weeks to do this but I procrastinated and it ended up being three days of work right here. If I had more time I would have tweaked a lot of things in this, such as some sound, and some animation (a lot of animation actually). But I really appreciate you reviewing this. Thank you.