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Reviews for "Dylan's Story"

Even though the animation was pretty simple, it was a good animation. Funny story too. I wonder how you lived with the shame?

BobtheZebra responds:

Surprisingly no one found out about this story until recently so I really had no shame about it, and now I look back and laugh about the whole experience. Thanks for your input though, I know it was simple animation, but this was made for a project in my english class and it didn't have to be that elaborate. Also I only had 2 weeks to do this but I procrastinated and it ended up being three days of work right here. If I had more time I would have tweaked a lot of things in this, such as some sound, and some animation (a lot of animation actually). But I really appreciate you reviewing this. Thank you.

Hahaha funny man, unlucky on that guy

BobtheZebra responds:

I didn't feel bad for him at the time but now that I think about it, I guess it would have been nice to help him.... oh well hahaha

Pretty Good, but not of potentional good enough to make it on the page. At least, thats my opinion, you never know. :)

Good work.

BobtheZebra responds:

I never expect to make the page, if I wanted to make FP then I would have tweaked a lot of the animation and improved some things. But thanks for your opinion, I really appreciate it. :)

Certainly not a bad story. Could have used a little more illustration and animation.
I liked it.

I used to do the same thing when I do to Walmart. (Play the games, not pee myself)