At 11/21/04 01:59 PM, LordSkeletor wrote:

Nice work there,nearly fineshed my other one it will be done in about 20 mins hopefully :D

Lol thanks. It seems this plac eis turning into poetry corner :P

At 11/21/04 01:52 PM, Frozen_fox wrote: Im bored so I just wrote this up in like 3 minutes.

It gave me a chuckle... ahhh, the good ol'days. Its quite creative for only 3 mins work. : )

At 11/21/04 02:04 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:

At 11/21/04 01:52 PM, Frozen_fox wrote: Im bored so I just wrote this up in like 3 minutes.

It gave me a chuckle... ahhh, the good ol'days. Its quite creative for only 3 mins work. : )

lol thank you kindly......god knows where I got the idea from though.

At 11/21/04 02:02 PM, Frozen_fox wrote:

At 11/21/04 01:59 PM, LordSkeletor wrote:

Nice work there,nearly fineshed my other one it will be done in about 20 mins hopefully :D

Lol thanks. It seems this plac eis turning into poetry corner :P

Well ,considering all i did was post a bunch of poems and then bugged everyone else to try lol.. then yes.
But i am biased, poetry is my love. Like i said before... i practically Dream in Verse.

But hey, we can discuss my current novel if you want or if you guys are writing any novels?
Mine is about vamps, lycans, immortals, satan, demons, and a couple other creatures i made up. Its a twisted thriller, but i think it is the book idea that will get me published as a novelist.
I am sick of writing articles and what not.. id prefer to be published as a novelist. So i work hella hard on it.

Cheers for now mates

Ah finished here you go!

Dreams
My dreams come swift as if on life itself
I seem to see it pass me by
My life is a dream all by itself
I sleep through a silent lullaby
I'm ready for a simple meaning
But it will not show its face to me
What is my true reason for being
I have to fight myself it seems
I look back and come to a conclusion
that my life to me will always be apart from reality....
nothing more than a dream

Hope you enjoyed :D

another 3 minute wonder by me :P

Feed the freak and shake you bones.
Move you feet and dance the twirl.
Dance is something that all can enjoy.
Be you man woman girl or boy.
Show your skills and dance for your life.
Dance like you mean it.
Dance all night
Dance the foxtrot dance the waltz
Dance the charleston dance the jive.
Dance for forever feel the vibe.
Dance like you mean it dance to the beat!
Show your rhythm and tap your feet!
Dance like you mean it and dance like you can!
Dancing can be enjoyed by both child and man!

shit i got caught too... can someone just post this in WOR for me... i cant pots for 20 more mins.

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At 11/21/04 02:46 PM, Frozen_fox wrote:

At 11/21/04 02:44 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Karess: We should let the doctor do what he does best and let Tsasal rest. Doctor, put him in the spare bed when your done.

Karhein" If you dont mind Ill go with him. It would probably do good for him to see a friendly face when he comes round."

Karess: Oh, of course, the spare room has a couch area that you can rest upon if need be. I guess even a theif has a kind heart.

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That is just what i was about to post before it said that i couldnt. Just state that your posting it for me. I'd be grateful.

At 11/21/04 02:44 PM, Frozen_fox wrote: another 3 minute wonder by me :P

You really like to dance. I like your poetry cuz it always makes me chuckle. It is fun and entertaining. Good stuff! lol.

At 11/21/04 02:22 PM, LordSkeletor wrote: Ah finished here you go!

At first i was a little skeptical... i was not really getting into the poem... however, the ending was very, very well done. You wrapped up the poem as well as any one could. Overall, i liked your other better. Your other one was just one that was a light read, but i also had to wrap my head around... i really enjoyed it.

At 11/21/04 02:50 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:

At 11/21/04 02:44 PM, Frozen_fox wrote: another 3 minute wonder by me :P

You really like to dance. I like your poetry cuz it always makes me chuckle. It is fun and entertaining. Good stuff! lol.

lol thanks :P

I posted your thing in WOR and I posted my reply to it aswell.

Thanks,shall I whip up another ?

At 11/21/04 02:55 PM, LordSkeletor wrote: Thanks,shall I whip up another ?

Go on you no you want to :P

Anothe rone by me for no reason. im really bored at the moment so im on a poem writing spree

The British are coming oh me! Oh My!
The British are coming quick ,quick hide!
They come in their thousands red shirts and all
They come in their thousands with their soccer balls.
The Man U fans are here right now!
Their invading America’s soccer leagues now!
“Help help!” Yell the American soccer teams.
“ The British are coming and will shatter our dreams!”
The British are coming oh me oh my!
Manchester Untied are coming everyone hide.!

Oh well no-one answered here it is anyway! Enjoy :D

Cosmos

Even the unexpected fits the plan
All works of days a network meshed so fine
That even accidents assume their fitted place
The unknown, gambits pre-designed
The uninvited, already registered.

What I have done today
Was launched at birth
Not mine alone but everyone's
Back to the single strand.
One more, one less, unthinkable
Fulcrum for toppling the universe.

Nothing means that wasn't meant
Nothing meant that doesn't mean
My touch upon your hand this morning
Confirmed ten billion souls in balance
Explained five million years of standing up
Justified a million galaxies
And the opening this afternoon
Of that tiny tea rose near the window.

(Non-ryme)

At 11/21/04 02:53 PM, Frozen_fox wrote: lol thanks :P

I posted your thing in WOR and I posted my reply to it aswell.

Ya i saw. Thanks alot. : )

LordSkeletor: Ya, if your enjoying yourself. I would enjoy reading it. I am surprised how fast you guys come up with poems. Then again, i am a perfectionist. I read mine over like 50 times b4 i ever let anyone else read them. I am way to serious and dedicated to my poetry.

Anways, i might not be on for a while, but when i get back, i will be sure to read your poem.

At 11/21/04 03:01 PM, LordSkeletor wrote: Oh well no-one answered here it is anyway! Enjoy :D

Im insulted I replied to you :P. Nice poem. Think we can fill this whole page up with poems we do in like 5 minutes?

Nothings happening her eor in WOR :-(

Just the way Im feeling

Its just the way I’m feeling.
Its not anything personal you hear?
Its not that I hate it.
I’m just not in the mood.
If I want to come along I will
But tonight I just wanna get my fill
Of sitcoms and soaps operas
That are always on TV.
I wanna relax tonight
I don’t want to rush.
You’ve just got to understand.
Its nothing against you.
I’m sure you will have a wail of a time
In your cooking class with all the potato peeling
you’ve just got to understand
Its just the way I’m feeling.

Did i ever post my surreal poem entitled Alenio?

At 11/21/04 04:39 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Did i ever post my surreal poem entitled Alenio?

errrrrrr.....dont think so

At 11/21/04 04:44 PM, Frozen_fox wrote:

At 11/21/04 04:39 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Did i ever post my surreal poem entitled Alenio?

errrrrrr.....dont think so

Okay then.. here it is. My first attempt at Surreal Poetry (which i dont think has been attempted before... not sure)

Alenio
A Surreal Poem
By, K. Myst Williams

Swallowed dark unto itself
The book of gold leads fall the shelf
Mix and fade while Tic leads Toc
Open closed, conscious yet to knock
Pace afar, card or not
Fold alone, dagger meets the sign of the cross

Stream of red; drip and drop
Wrong beneath, tide lifts center’s top
Through forward, time ponders stop
Un-lifted past, all ponders change
Pumping right, left off the stage
Soon the end as we began
Where light has done all it can

Rise and toy; religious void
Cup an aero, not yet deployed
For being, time and hand, is will destroyed
Stare tear, no fast that can avoid
Tense before grab, tension in the modern sound
No option; what’s left is what surrounds

Witness; kind cunning, but crowd
Perfect wrong, not behind, but loud
Under stone; feel the heart not yet but found

Interesting but not quite what i was expecting Surreal to me means weird but funy at the same tim. Still a good poem though :P

Can you read through the last few of my 3 minute wonders Ive done and say what you think?

Surrealism is not supposed to be funny. It is supposed to an expression from the subconcious. It is supposed to lack logic, but in the same respect, make sense if it were portrayed through the eyes of subconcious. Surrealism usually does not make sense to the average viewer and is twisted, thoughtful and confusing. Surrealism, although logic-less, takes alot of planning, alot of talent, and alot focus. So much focus i had to that poem in parts. It is supposed to make you think and make you touch certain aspects of your own life or life in general. Sometimes society is expressed, sometimes issues, sometimes nothing at all. Surrealism is defiently not funny though.

Umm, i read the last poem you wrote there, you always make me chuckle. It was not my fav of the bunch, but it was still clever. However, i didnt feel it flowed as well as some of the others. Yet again you made me laugh tho. Now focus some that comedy into the Oz script ;)

Cheers,

Here is one that ive worked on for the time I was away

Seasons

Summer is fading away
Soon there will be snow
But before this happens
The winds will start to blow

Colorful trees will abound
Hues shimmering in the sun
Then the leaves will start to fall
And raking them won't be fun

Jack Frost will follow shortly
Nipping at our heels
Ice patches forming on the road
Causing us to spin our wheels

But all told, I love all
The different seasons
Each one has something
I love for different reasons.

Tell me what you think :D

Since everyone is sooo in love with poetry now... i am thinking up a list of all the types of poems i can possible think of... there are probable alot more, but this is the best i can do:
Acrostic Poetry
Clerihew
Epigram
Sestina
Swap Quatrain
Tetractys
Villanelle
Ballad
Free Verse
Lanturne
Monody
Nonet
Shape Poetry
Tanka
Tongue Twister Poems
Pantoum
Quinzaine
Rondelet
Diamante
Cinquain
Didactic Poetry
Ethere
Kyrielle
Rondel
Epic
Fable
Kyrielle
Sonnet
Mirrored Refrain
Naani
Palindrome Poetry
Quatrain
Minute Poetry
Monotetra
Epitaph
Haiku
Monorhyme
Ode
Paradelle
Rictameter
Quatern
Rondeau
Senryu
Terza Rima
Triolet
Clarity Pyramid
Septolet
Sonnet
Limerick
Sedoka
Ottava Rima
Terzanelle
Tyburn

Pick a random one... look it up... find an example and an outline of how it is written and write away. lol... i am more doing this to see how many i knew. I probable have one poem for all of these types.

Anyways, later.

At 11/21/04 05:41 PM, LordSkeletor wrote: Here is one that ive worked on for the time I was away

I liked seasons.. it is smooth and flows well. Except in paragraph tw it was a little rigged. Otherwise, amazing work. A hidden talents you didnt even know was there.

I love how i have been working on this club for a month now and World of Roleplay is nearing the number of pages this one has in just a couple days. lol.

I guess people like writing in RP... dont like writing in writing clubs? Makes sense to me....

I am for the night prolly. So later mates. I might check in b4 i head to the matress.

At 11/21/04 05:28 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:

. Now focus some that comedy into the Oz script ;)

lol will do :P You coem up with any jokes I might be able to use in the last bit of it I posted cause its kind of balnd atbthe moment and I cant think of any jokes :-(

Ahh Im begining to love poetry! here yet another

Stained Glass Eyes

I look to a girl with so much class,
My eyes stare like broken glass,
The shards of tears flood the floor
For every single drop replaces two more,
For no one can wipe away my tears,
They are of pain condensed by fears,
The girl I crave find me not,
Always forgotten until I rot,
But when get consumed by the black,
Never to live or ever come back,
So I hold your heart close to mine,
And for once in my life I feel fine

Post some feed-back if you want. :)

At 11/22/04 11:28 AM, LordSkeletor wrote:

Post some feed-back if you want. :)

nice. Its strange I use dot not like poetry but now I like it :P

another one by me

I stare across the room with but one care.
Why is it as though I’m never there?
I seem to be invisible I seem to disappear
Whenever anyone else stands near.
Tell me God why am I cursed?
With this power to be ignored.
Why do people only notice me when they are bored?
I sit and stare into the wall pondering if its worth it all
My thoughts run wild in my mind
Their destinations so hard to find.
No one ever really cares what happens to me
After all noone ever sees me.

(Hey that was good fox)
Heres a quick one for ya

Life Belongs to Me

Maybe my life to me
Is not what it's cut out to be
This is something people can't see
Sometimes I just want to flee
This life that belongs to me
They say that I have a fee
To pay to the people who created me
But I say to them can't you see
This life is not what I wanted it to be
Even if my life is not want I want it to be
This life still belongs to me

At 11/22/04 11:51 AM, LordSkeletor wrote: (Hey that was good fox)

Thanks. Your last one was good but I wasnt to keen on all the lines ending the same......to many ee endings for my liking.

A Spectacular show

Hey diddle dee and hey diddle oh.
Come one come all to my spectacular show!
Come see the man with the strength of two.
Watch the clowns juggle their over sized shoes.
Ladies and gentlemen lend me your ears.
Come watch the wizard make his assistant disappear.
Come one come all to my spectacular show
You’ll have such a good time you’ll never want to go.