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Reviews for "I'm Afraid of Butterflies"

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The story did not match the title. Make the title catchy but still have something to do with the story, And how in the hell do you get a what looks like a 80 year sociopathic aunt who kills people and makes roses out of them? Really patch up the story to something that has a interesting plot line. The voices were okay. Better that what I thought it would be. I also like the sound. In ONE part it built suspension. But It was a worthless part of the animation. You should have started to build it up when she asks about to husband and childen.

Nandi responds:

>_> As I've said before this is the short version of the story so I probablly wont make sence and be boring. Whats wrong with a old woman making her roses red out of people? Nothing.

pretty cute,i'd say

i liked it. the female charater sounded british but thats still cool. you did the voicing well,making the Aunts voice sound like a creature. the ending was a very nice twist since reading the title you just thought that a butterfly was going to eat her or something.make more stuff like this loved it.

Nandi responds:

It's an australian accent actually ^_^ I didnt do the aunts voice, a guy did. lolol thanks, and for the review.

Great, even if it was pretty weird...

I didn't get the ending. But I loved the graphics. The monochrome style sorta sets a mood. It was pretty strange, but nice graphics none-the-less. And if anyone else says it's emo, then just call them ignorant. Just because it's in "black and white" and the girl has her hair in front of her eyes doesn't mean the cartoon's emo in any way. I hated the voice acting. The old lady sounded like she wasn't human, and the girl sounded British. But I put a score for interactivity because you really felt attached to the character. Overall, pretty good.

Nandi responds:

Did you watch after the credits, she just gets buried under the rose. (: Yes, they probally dont pay attention to the animation, and are too busy paying attention to how it looks. Pssh. LOL the old lady was done by a guy, you make is sound like sounding brittish is wrong ): It's an australian accent. Thank you for the review.

How about posting up the long version?

It doesnt make sence for you to post up a short version that you dont like, so post up the one the that you thought was better.

Nandi responds:

O= Makes sense since I havent actually animated the long version... its still being written. This gives me clues on how to make it better tho ^^. Thanks for the review.

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Wow, I really liked this piece of flash here.
I thought the animation was extremely smooth, and you had an original style. I dodnt find it emo-ish as you said, and I liked the speech bubbles and expressions. Made it very unique.
I thought the voices you used were fine.
I found it quite funny, especially the old womans teeth (Made me chuckle ^_^)
Overall, I thought it was a good flash. Hope you carry on animating!