very cute
a job for yoshi? my guess was to be a race yoshi (or if he coulnt do that he could pursue a career as a gutter cleaner using his tounge but thats unsanitary) what i was expecting at the end was after it said the end and went to that menu screen, a short clip of mario and luigi dead at the dinner table for eating a goomba (oh well) great job ^v^
Hey guy pleas read my review
that was a grate flash but there is alot of room for inprovement.heres an idey for a new flash-something with mario and kirby-good luck dude!
Great...but could have been better.
Great sound, good sprite work, and a genuinely funny storyline...you have all three, and I must say I am impressed.
There is room for improvement, however. From the way it's written, it makes me believe English is your second language. The whole dialogue seems to be a bit "off." The characters speak to each other in words that have a formal connotation. As a result, while the story is funny, the dialogue is a bit lifeless.
Second, while some of the visuals look great, there were moments where I believe you could have done better in your choices. For instance, when Mario gave Yoshi the money, why not use a gold coiln, and rewrite the dialogue as to not include "real world" monetary values. Also, when Yoshi climbed the stairs, his movements were a little off. There are other things that bothered me, but I hope you can understand what I mean.
Don't get me wrong, this Flash is very good. It's just these little details prevent me from giving it a five.
Thanks for the rating but this is my first animation and english is my second language so I don't understand completely the tutorials (I am only in my second year of english at school...). I will try to make better. Bye
Quite clever
I think you got away with it this tme but never, EVER make a mario movie again - there are just too many. Anyway, clever idea but you dragged it out too long. I enjoyed it overall so well done.
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ok, you probably are from a different country but you need to work on your grammar