Cute
This wasn't terrible by any means, but my biggest criticism would be the length. It was nice to see that you had a story that the characters worked towards a solution. It seemed just a bit too long and I think that if you had voice actors, it may have added something extra to this. But overall, I thought it was cute and had a nice little story to it. Cheers.
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ZzZzZzZz there are 2 things you need to do with any movie 1 you must have good story or parody of story and some better graphics with nice sound and this must be or funny or action this is hmm maybe you want do funny i dont know ps. im new so i can be mistake :D
It was okay...
But I think you didn't put too much work into the animation or anything. You just made the sprites walk, and when they were standing still, nothing really happened, it didn't seem very interesting. The English was easy to understand, but I didn't think it was a very good story in the first place. Good luck with future animations, and try not to take little shortcuts or anything, make sure it looks smooth, and make the characters express stuff.
Nothing Special
This was really long....and it's a whole-lotta nothing.
I realize this probably took you a while to make, but please put a little more thought into your work next time. This isnt funny...entertaining....or really much of anything but SMB characters running around with text blocks...hire an outside writer and just think things out ahead of time :)
Also, I'm going to assume that English is not your first language.
ssssoooo sssslllloooowwww
it was static and slow. That's too bad, because the slowness of the flash made evident the ending from the beginning.