Something else!
This is something I've never seen anyone come up with; a job for yoshi! However, I'd never let him work in my mom and I's bakery (I'm an apprentice pastry chef working for my mom. DON'T LAUGH OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN AND TURN YOU INTO THE WORLD'S FIRST BLOOD PASTRY!) Not only because I know he can't cook, but he'd eat everything in sight! Yoshi's are constantly hungry and have bottomless stomachs, and their rubbery bodies don't help. Good job, keep making movies!
Well done
You have made yourself a very acceptable first flash movie, congrats ^_^
The story line was pretty basic but you managed to work with it swiftly. The music was, what would be expected from a Mario movie. You didn’t include any violence, which I admirer you for, a lot of flash movies resort to blood shed to get a higher score. I would have used sprits from one particular game instead of many but it still worked well together.
Some pointers which might help you with your next flash movie:
- Work on you drawing skills
- Try other animation techniques, other then animating spites
- Take some time into drawing out some ideas/storylines/character designs before starting a flash movie
- Practice makes perfect so keep up the good work
*If you ever need any more help, I would be more then glad to give you a few more tips. Well, I can at least point you in the direction you need to go*
PM me ;D
Thanks for the tips!!! When I make my next animation and if I have a problem, I will send you a message. You must be a professional, no???
hmm..
i dont really know what to say. it wasnt horrible but then again it wasnt that great either. But it was better than most sprite movies because it had a plot. well thats all.
Ugh
There was so much to be annoyed with in that movie. Every sentence was a horrible gramatical error. and in the description, it said to sell our eggs like yoshi... I dont think any of us can lay eggs... I got a small kick out of mocking this movie, so I gave it a 5.
Cudos
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yawn... good sounds