Exceptional
A bold concept, backed by solid ideas and design beneath the minimalist graphics. Well done, good sir. There aren't many game designers like you around.
I understand you're going for something abstract, but I feel that you could have done more with the little tidbits of text at various parts of the game. Especially when some of them flash past once and I never see them again. I'm not saying that a single, linear storyline is essential, but right now it seems (at least to me) rather random.